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So, okay, no more chapters. It was good just standing by itself. -ShadowTwit

I thought that this was good, and I liked the dot-dot-dot (...) Its adds to the effect. :) Looking forward to reading more of this. Now, where have I heard ...

Ha! Very funny! :lol: :lol: "We're hungry!" They bellow, "It's time for a meal!" I hug my stuffed teddy. "Don't eat me!" I squeal. ...and... :D "What is it?" They ...

Phew, thanks Goldenheart, you've really eased my mind! The one thing I did NOT want this to be was stereotyped. As to the language, its a mix of Cornish, Manx, ...

Yes'm. I don't want the girl to be pitiable, and as it's going to be in first person, I hope it won't be. Oh, no, is it too like an ...

Oooh its big! Can you break it up into paragraphs so's its easier to read? (Yeah, I know that's rich coming from me, the one who NEVER makes paragraphs, but ...

What about something that ISN'T a monkey or a dragon? Yeah, I know the vote was narrowed down to dragon or monkey, but if its gonna take twenty years to ...

As this is just the prologue, it is meant to be rather vague, and this is the only part that is going to be in the present tense. If it ...

Weeeeel.........I don't like that about Ramwick and Karz. Its slash, and I positively hate slash. The story itself is well written, and I want to find out about the It ...

Hmm, not bad! Makes me want to read Chapter Two (which I'm going to do :D) A woman in silver and red garments, elderly, This would read better as "An ...

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DRAGONS! There's a surfeit of monkeys here (no offence anyone? :) ) Dragons are cool, mystical, mythical, fantastic, fantasy-ical, and sublime!! :D 8)

I think your ideas are very good. I like Tip and Tap, they're so childish, yet kinda cute. And the dispute about who is older - liked that bit!

Glad you liked it, Myth! 8)

The year was 1899, and for Winston Churchill, it was a busy one. In that year he was twenty-four, experienced from Lord Kitchener’s campaign in the Sudan, and looking forward ...