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Very pretty, even though I don't like Eragon. You could break this up better...I think...some of the lines are a bit too short while others are too long...don't ask me ...

I like this a lot! :) Your style is very good, and your descriptions of characters conjure up a good picture of waht they might look like. I like the ...

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Thank you very much. Where else was I to put it? Its not meant to be un-cliched, its my own colour-code that links certain colours with certain emotions. Maybe I ...

I liked this, especially the bit about the ice. Its the sort of thing I can imagine myself doing... :lol: Yes, a few spellings mistakes that Ofour mentioned. I don't ...

Thoughts are a rainbow, feelings are a spectrum. Blue for wideness and calmness: The sea and the sky. Beautiful, never ending, spacious. Red for danger and warning: Poppies swaying in ...

Forgive me for sounding stupid, but what is the green candle that is still burning? Have I missed the point? (I'm not that great at extracting meanings from things that ...

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Yes, cliched boy-and-dragon story, but your style looks like you're good enough to get away with it! :D Proof-read this, make sure you put capital letters in their proper place ...

Pushing the leaves away, she immediately twisted from the scene, and lost her lunch. The bile was still green in her mouth when she turned back. There, bloody and severed, ...

O-h...flash fic=under 500 words. *dockets information in brain-pigeonhole "Things to remember when wandering through YWS"* No, it wasn't Harry Potter (I don't do HP), but someplace else. I think it ...