Twit

Granted, but the apparatus needed to do that takes up all of the room, so you have to sleep in the garage. That was tricky one! I wish that I ...

6/10. It sounds nice and sad, but I don't know the context.

Neat-oh! I'm pushed for time right now, but: He did not answer; similar thoughts frequented his pwn mind. "own", right? Laughter snagged as his eardrums, "at" She raised an eyebrow ...

Don't force the writing. If you do that, then the story will stink. I can't advise you about the parent issue. :wink: I have my own room, so even though ...

"Philosophy, Trai - cathen , philosophy. Our main subject. It's a wide, wide world, filled with wide, wide thoughts, that fit inside your wide, wide head. Oh, and -" *grins, ...

"Kiss?" *raises one eyebrow mockingly* "You expect me to restrain my mirth long enough to give an intelligent answer?" *gives up and goes into great bursts of unfeigned laughter* "What ...

I want to know ANYTHING and EVERYTHING about the Polynesian-type islands. Languages, lifestyle, goverment, mythology, history, anything. Links to helpful sites are welcome as welll. :) I'm interested

If there's lots of lights, then it's difficult to see the stars properally. And, really, the sky can be any colour at night, from dark blue, to purple to grey ...

"Philosophy? Like that solved anything. Philosophy is a good way to talk and get nothing done. Hey, considering that, I like philosophy!" -The Raven

You know what might be a good thing to consider - apart from the great stuff Singing Telegram already mentioned? How does the character react to being told that they ...

PLEASE DO THE GRAMMER AND SPACING THAT EVERYONE HAS COMMENTED ON!!!!! Please? I mean, I didn't even read all of it, because it was so squashed together, and the little ...

Y'know, I always wonder whether people mean to put as much symbolism/themes/symbols etc. in their books as the GCSE examiners make out. Did Harper Lee really mean To Kill A ...

Hi Stefan! You need to post lots of your stories on here, then when you read all the glowing critiques, you'll become a fan of your writing. :wink: -Twit

Hi! *waggles fingers like Oliver Hardy* :D Oscar Wilde... He's very swoon worthy, isn't he? He looked good when he was younger, before he cut his hair. I always thought ...

Cool! This is just a one-shot thing, right? I don't think there are any mistakes. The only thing that leapt out was: “And beating up your opponents.” said the voice, ...