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Re: Character dialogue
"I sometimes feel that everyone here is a Fool. People at court have no idea of the very basic things in life. But, I suppose that is not a credible ...
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Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but it finishes itself really badly, and in the process of finishing, hits the "Self-Destruct" button hidden inside your computer. I wish the Extended Version of Return of the ...
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Re: Character Answer Game
" Any pair of shoes would be great. One does not waste good money and leather in giving the dog shoes" ~The Raven "My Chadyor boots. They're knee-high, made of ...
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Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, no one's stopping you, but then you're lying. I wish my hands didn't hurt right now (or any other part of me, so don't try THAT loophole.
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Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but when he doesn't, he becomes so depressed you wish he had got in. I wish I could think of much needed conflict in my story.
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Re: A Prologue
Good beginning! You didn't always space out your dialogue properally, though. How will the story carry on, I wonder? “Don’t worry! I like them. That one is brown,” the prince ...
Apr 13, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted. Your worst nightmare (whoever that may be) has sat next to you instead. I wish my hair was already washed.
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Re: A Taste of Fate
Good! Sorry to repeat what others have said, but the Winston Churchill thing leapt out. As it was for Fool's Duel, you didn't need to say that. That aside, it ...
Apr 13, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
5/10 It's alriiiight, I guess.
Apr 13, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Where's your wish for me to corrupt, Royboy?!
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Re: Crazy Questions
At night. In bed. Duh. How many toes do guinea-pigs have on their front feet?
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Re: Ultra-short Fiction
Sorry for my lack of accuracy, Baroness. Yeah, thinking back, you play the flute don't you? Whoopsie. :oops: -------- "Ow!" "Hold still." "Ouch!" "Hold still." " Owwwwww - eeeee! " ...
Apr 13, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but your motivation leaves you feeling so drained that you refuse to write ever again. I wish I didn't have to lay the table.
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Re: Ultra-short Fiction
I stroked the smooth silver of the flute, my fingertips brushing over the keys. I could dimly see my face in the shiny surface, a featureless blur. I could feel ...
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Re: Is it wrong to love one of your characters?
I'm attatched to my characters. Not on the "love" scale, but they certainly stay in my head for 99% of the day. :) -ST
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