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What's the next subject?! Okay, I'll do one: Newfoundland.

This. Is. Totally. AMAZING!!! Seriously, Gyr, you need to get this published. It's great! I don't think there's any mistakes/grammer/typos in here, and anyway if there are, someone else can ...

Where is it?!?!?! You need to type it in here, not put the link to the folder!

No, I don't live in London. I live further south by the coast. The descriptions of the setting are really gathered through extensive watching of films of Dickens adaptations and ...

Can you space this out? The spaces dividing up the dialogue are in all the wrong places, and frankly, as it's mostly all dialogue, it needs to be spaced out ...

A deception, an illusion, and a driving force that makes all things possible. Why do we feel guilt?

"Haven't we had this one before?" ~The Raven "Nothing. I make it a point not to do regretable things." ~Fal. "All the times I've lost my temper with Rat. Not ...

"Oh, well, I suppose so. *shrugs, and trys to ignore the Raven's laughter in the background* Kit, where are you? Someone here wants to talk to you." ~Fal. "Yes? I'm ...

Chapter One: Eyes and Paper "Wiggins! What are you doing?" "What? I ain't doing nothin'!" "Yes, you are! Wait! - no don't!" I snatched at the paper that Wiggins was ...

A few spelling errors, but it's good! What is your first language, then?

9/10 Dragons are cool and all, but it isn't the best picture of a dragon.

10/10! I can see Tia Dalma as we speak . . . well. not literally, but figuratively . . . metaphorically? . . . imaginatively . . . You get ...

5/10 Pithy, but it reads like poetry gone wrong. That's just my opinion. :)

"Can I say motley? Mjerla , anyways, which is like a cross between skirt and trousers." ~The Raven "Trousers of course! What am I? A girl?" ~Fal. What do you ...

A judge, with short grey hair, blue eyes, and a kind personality. Makes people feel welcome just by smiling. Gwalchmai. (Male)