Twit

I went back and edited Chapter 1 and changed some stuff, so if something seems weird it could be because of that. TWO Dinner is simple; curry with lots of ...

Hello! I almost don’t want to review this because I really liked it—and, yes, I connected with it as well. Aiee. However, reading something and not picking something out of ...

Hello! :D [quoteMy white hair, flowing down in soft waves, quickly mimicked my dress.[/quote] Eh. Throwing out character description like this is clunky and inmyface. Very much inmyface. I don’t ...

I hated Tess when I first read it, but studying it for A-Level meant it kind of grew on me, lol. What would I do in her place? Well, I ...

8/10 Lol, I remember that bit. XD

Hi Taylor! Welcome to YWS! Ooh, you speak more than one language? That's so cool! All I could manage was some Latin and a few words of various Celtic stuff, ...

7/10 Cute. XD

Hi! This was quite well written. :) There were some instances where I think you could improve -- mostly by cutting words out. Like here: Gemma let the mug pause ...

Hello! First off, you need to rate this as a topic, not just as a note at the top. When you start a new topic, you’ll see underneath the title ...

Hello! K, I’m going to be kinda picky because this is very short and because that’s how I roll. Twit Flounder, soulless shredder, pleased to meet you. The soft click ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! You seem to have already grasped the importance of reviewing, lol. :) PM or Wall me if you ever need a critique or if you have ...

Hello! This is purty! ^_^ I'm not quite sure how the mermaid part comes into it... I was expecting, you know, tails and stuff, lol. Still, this is very well ...

Hai! Welcome to YWS! :D I see you like Doctor Who. I muchly approve. :mrgreen: Who's your favourite Doctor? I really disliked Eleventh in his first season, but then he ...

Hi! I don't often review poetry--well, to be completely honest, I almost never review poetry--so bear with me here and I apologise if what I say isn't very helpful. Maybe ...

Hai! This is quite short, so I’ll go through and be picky about it, if that’s all right. :) Smack, smack, smack... My feet pounded softly against the floor as ...