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4/10 Kinda interesting, but not that much. I might appreciate it better if I knew more about the angel in the marble.

Cool! The last one's funny. :D I never have much success with editing photos. -Twit

Hi Greenjay! Or Greenie, can people call you Greenie? It's nice to have a nickname. :D You're writing a novel? What's it about? Hope you like YWS! -Twit

Yo to you too, Bloo. *burbles* Hope you like YWS! It's very helpful, and lots of fun too. :D Whaddya write? Apart from circles, I hope you've moved on from ...

*The Character Vortex opens and deposits Larasathí Akashuri into the conversation* "Oh, how did I get here? *looks around and spies Rohsair* Rohsair! You here too? Hi everyone! I'm Sathí. ...

"When I lived on the streets and in hostels with Da and Kester. What's to describe a street?" ~The Raven "I live on the streets permamently. Like the Raven said, ...

Goodie! The next bit! I know that it's more helpful to say what wrong with this, but I honestly can't. Never mind, Myth, or someone else will be more eagle-eyed ...

"No, and anyway, who'd I write one to?" ~The Raven "I can write, yes." ~Kit "No, not really." ~Fal. "I not that good at writing, full stop. I only learned ...

I always associate the second person with those "Give Yourself Gosebumps" books. Not sure that I'd ever try to write in second, I think it would be too patronizing.

I don't mean to be a party-pooper, but should this go in Research? I'm afraid "To Kill A Mockingbird" is all I can recommend, and that won't help you much, ...

Eek, this is rather confusing. It was bad enough with you having two chapters numbered the same. Can't you make it a bit simpler? :wink: Hope you put the next ...

ouchie! where's Tammy?! You don't need to be 100% exact as to the court details, as half of us don't know what it should be like in real life. I ...

"Laugh. Do something rash and irresponsible. Tell people what I really think of them, cos in five minutes they won't be here anymore to tell me off." ~The Raven "It ...

Hi Liam! Hope you enjoy YWS! -Twit

*nerd's handshake* Yep, it's great with the Doctor quoting Shakespeare all the time and S. is going "I could use that!" :lol: And all those Harry Potter references creeping in, ...