Twit

Akshurlie, you *do* have to crit at least two pieces before you post any of your own. I thought this was a good poem, although the rhyming didn't flow so ...

Um, punctuation? Um, grammer? Um, spelling? And I'm not a fan of suicides. Points for spacing it out - I never spaced out my work. Name sezitahll! -Twit

I didn't fully read this, and that tells aginst me, I know, but I have to say that I like black and white movies. Laurel and Hardy just don't work ...

"Let's move it, chewit! *starts whirling again happily* Isn't that nice? I'm interesting!" ~The Raven "And so am I!" ~Rohsair "K'ratcha and Danteel, both, I'm in the same boat. No ...

Name: Robyn Harrow Age: 19 Gender: Female Eye Colour: Green Hair Colour: Blonde Years Completed: 2 Clan: Claw Griffin Name: Sunclaw Feather Colour: Gold Eye Colour: Gold Gender: Male Robyn ...

I peered up at the centaur who looked as grave and impassive as a marble statue. He looked at me silently and scraped his hoof against the floor, so I ...

" Hai Mai , did I burn you? Sorry . . . " ~The Raven "Your writer's read my stories, what more does she need?!" ~Kit "She needs a wider ...

*mockingly* "I'd be delighted, Tanny-boy." *grabs Tannar's hand and the two start whirling about* ~The Raven "I'd hate to see those two in a fic together." ~Fal. "What do you ...

"My life, my sanity, my sense of humour, my fire." ~The Raven "Codahüti, and Lórlan." ~Fal. "Creatures with soft skins. Pinchable skins." ~Kallik "My friendship with the people around me." ...

"Oh, sweet," I drawled. "The Ogre has to protect the Shapeshifter. Do I spy pink clouds of romance blossoming on the horizon?" "Imp!" Nark leaned forward. "My foot is ever ...

Fand and Brad Harsh critiquers

Well, I like going places, but I'm rather a couch potato extrordinaire. I have difficulty with making polite conversation when people come visiting, and my mum told me, "Ask about ...

"What's herirarchal?" ~Kit "You already know what an idiot is, don't you?" ~Kallik "You know, I just had a thought." ~Fal. "Wonders will never cease!" ~The Raven "All our names, ...

"The sky!" ~Fal and the Raven together. "It's so wide and beautiful, and . . . " ~Fal. "And it's claustrophobic underground." ~The Raven "I'd rather live on the ground, ...

"Oh dear, I'm growing slack. The Ogre wants to know my purpose. Do I have to have a purpose? Can I not just exist for the sake of existing?" I ...