Twit

Hey Kyllorac! This is for a contest due in on Friday 2nd, so if you wouldn't mind being harsh, I'd very much appreciate it. :)

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED name: Twit (or any variations thereupon) age: 19 (so far) what you write: Mainly fantasy, although I'm branching out, and am currently trying my hand at something ...

I think both of them are equal, because if you want a thingie that breathes fire with its mind or whatever, it can be either a species of creature (like ...

The Journal is incandescently awesome, and Ben! Hi!

Hey Kitty! I have ma shredding hat on, so beware. Also, I just did a nice review, so you get a nit-picky one, I’m afraid. :mrgreen: Christmas in the streets ...

Hello! I really, really liked this! I love how it was clear practically from the very beginning that it was a cat's narration. I suppose the title helped with that, ...

Hello! Do you mind if I'm a little mean? K. This doesn't sound original at all. Run Wyatt through some Mary Sue tests. Link One and Link Two for Mary ...

Hello! Link: Genre: Um, general, I think? Kind of no-genre.

I have a short story called Gold and Silver that very muchly needs reviews. :)

Hello! I was a normal seventeen year old guy, ready to start collge . Then , I saved her life. Typo here. You don’t need that comma. I love everything ...

He knows that people don’t linger long in the gypsy market. They might pause to buy a bright wool scarf or a roll of velvet cloth, briefly touch the twisted ...

Hi! Welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy yourself here. ^_^ You can PM me (or anyone else with a green name) if you have any questions, and we'll ...

Hello, my name is Victor and right now I'm facing an ethical dilemma. Which is completely unreasonable, because how many other inventors have to face ethical dilemmas?

7/10 Your grammar needs work, and it looks like it's going to be a romance, which personally I don't like. ^_^ The flow is disjointed and if you mixed up ...

"I'd love to really have the eyes of a hawk. Making circuits would be so much easier, and I wouldn't need glasses at all." ~Victor "I wish I had better ...