Twit

Oh very good! :D And I DO like the idea of a "negative view point." "I don’t care!” answered Sherman, glaring around. “How do I see normally again?!” The Geezer ...

*jabs Fal in the ribs* "Go on, ladykiller. Swing it." ~The Raven "Now that hurt, and I'm not just talking about the poke." ~Fal. *maliciously* "Rohsair, my boy, this is ...

Should I know who you are?

I'm the Raven. Well, actually I'm not, but I am if you know what I mean. No, you don't. No suprises there. The sky is blue and I'm talking of ...

"Making a mess, certainly." ~Rohsair "Nope." ~Kit "Nope." ~Fal. "Making people get angry, sure." ~The Raven "Nope - or perhaps the Raven's answer." ~Kallik Do you like mince pies?

I only read it because of the title, being a devout Sherlockian. It was alright, nothing special, and it wasn't anything I'd read again or recommend to anyone. Perhaps I ...

Noonononononono! You need to put the actual writing on here so we can tear it apart! Otherwise, how can I crit? -Twit

"More, Tannar. That was real nice." ~The Raven " Sa da! More!" ~Fal. "Beautiful." ~Rohsair

Sohini: 9/10 Cute! And funny. :lol:

Oh, codes! *faints* I tried HTML once and nearly expired from ineptitude. Anyway, welcome to YWS! :D Hope ya like it here! -Twit

another decendant of mine is Robert the Bruce. Decendant? Ancestor, isnt that? And the Anglo-Saxon fight with Normandy - I think 1066 was the main time that conflict happened. Harold ...

"More dancing!" ~The Raven " Don't start!" ~Fal. *begins to laugh, then catches Fal's threatening look and shuts up* "Party-pooper." ~Kit *walks over on her hands to Tannar* "You look ...

I like this! :D That thing about your characters beng so real, and made up of different parts of your own character is really good, and it's something that all ...

I'm not Royboy, but I liked this. :) The thing about the commas coming before the ending quote marks has been said already. Do some people really say "totally" and ...

"Now this is more like it! Class at last!" ~Fal. "Not bad . . . " ~The Raven *yawns* "Don't do fancy, actually. It's alright, I suppose." ~Rohsair "I think ...