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I think this is from King Lear: Out, vile jelly! It's talking about eyes, cos someone gets his eyes plucked out. Macbeth: Is that a dagger I see before me? ...

"Only with your permission, Lady Killesha. The mind, whether it be human or elven is a sacred place, and not to be violated. ~Fal.

Which ways do you want help? On what? On which? And change your signature! It's probally not true for starters, and it puts people off reading this not-good story of ...

This was very good! Your style of writing is very easy to read, and the way you put Mohammed's last thoughts down was very effective. The thoughts of the terrorists ...

Next year

Hm, good! I like the way you don't make Alexandria out to be perfect; she feels jealous over her sister's fame and all. When's there going to be more of ...

Just keep at it. Write and write and write and write and write . . . Well, you might want to take a break now and then, but don't give ...

O-h, the foreshadowing! *Jaws theme tune starts playing* Nah, this was good, but you still need to leave a line between dialogue. You forget to do this with one part. ...

" What?? *is utterly gobsmacked* Um, no, I don't think so. Sorry, but I don't dance." ~Kit "State the blooming obvious." ~Kallik "Well, you wouldn't know how to if you'd ...

I liked this a lot! And I mean, a lot! Your style of writing flows nicely, and I like writing that is thoughtful, like this. And like JCobsessed's POD (check ...

Uh, yeah, it's a story about birds. Great. All fine and dandy, fantasmagorically FAN-tastic. So where is it? Sheesh, how can I crit a thing if the thing isn't there ...

Yeah I think what Dusky said summs it up, really. It was very good, and well written, but what was the pain at the end? And here: The boy’s name ...

3/10 Sounds appalling, but my first reaction was like, should I care? Unless you're talking about Jack Sparrow, which somehow, I doubt you are.

"Oooh, she's quick! Promising beginning...." ~The Raven "Where will it end? Will hearts be broken, will souls be forever entertwined in an interlacing relationship? Ah me! *sighs melodramatically and

I think the point of it was that it was predictable. It was well written, if macabre.