Twit

I found this a bit confusing in places, but that might be because I don't know these characters. Although I've seen Aethel in the Character Answer Game. :) The few ...

This is rather confusing. Sorry. But yes, where's a mod?

"You're a werewolf? How can I dance with a werewolf?" ~Fal. "Now, that was rude. That was rude, rude, rude on a scale I would find it difficult to surpass!" ...

Good idea. This is well written, but you have some errors with capitalization and commas. Some of your dialogue could go a bit more smoothly as well, I think. Dang! ...

I liked this a lot! What are Fin and the others, I want to know? Are you going to post more of this? Myth's dun the nitpick, so I'll just ...

Woo-er. Hm, there's a book on King Arthur by Kevin Crossley-Holland, and it mentions Courtly Love in there. It's called "The King Who Was And Will Be", and I found ...

Ahem, what sort? You could always invoke the name of a god, Venus, Jupiter, Vulcan, Juno, etc. Not sure I should be aiding this. :wink: -Twit

Coo! Thanky both of yez for the crits! :D I think I do tend to misuse colons. Tolkein scatters them all over the place, so I guess that's got to ...

Ouchie, well done on writing the beating scene - it made my insides go all funny. *squirms* Anyway, I didn't read all of this, just the, erm, juicy bit, sorry. ...

"I'd like cake, if K'ratcha summoned that up." ~Kit "That cake is mine! It's got my name on it." ~Rohsair "Aren't you smug." ~Kallik *nods, radiating smugness* "I have a ...

Ciq menha, oleth renq es-alom E oleth ix enriq rul burah hov dion. Druspriah ezan, oleth renq hov danesha E oleth ix enriq furin irah owriq banat. --------------------------- Chapter One: ...

Yes, I was looking for an outline on the Norman Conquest. You know, you could always read Alice in Wonderland for this - it gives the beginning of it, anyway. ...

"Yes!" ~The Raven "What?" ~Kit "Huh?" ~Fal. "Sounds nice." ~Rohsair "Whatever." ~Kallik Do you fight fair?

Darn, Ortega is so :evil: Great as ever, JC! :D Once again she answered, “yes.” Capitalize "yes". She sat with Tammy at their table, emotionally and physically drained , and ...

7/10 Profound. Don't like the one who said it.