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If you have the time, I'd love a review on Serpent's Teeth [2] :)

TWO The piano stool scraped back across the floor as I stood up. ‘Are you out of your mind?’ I demanded. ‘To do something like that would take—my dynamo wouldn’t ...

Hello! The bane of all grammar, the text. I'm not sure that this makes sense, like the two ends tying together. I'm not sure that texts are the bane of ...

Hello! If you have the time, I'd love some harsh shredding on this . ^_^

Thanky!

Method used: Flesch-Kincaid (English). Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 5. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 73. According to Wiki, this means that my work of gore and guts and zombie children will be ...

Hey Ranger! I love zombies. ^_^ XD A tooth just fell out of my mouth. I didn’t feel it, just saw it on the ground, found a gap in my ...

ONE The wind was howling like a wolf outside, and the piano sounded sour. In the faint candlelight, the keys looked yellow instead of white, as though the sourness was ...

Hello! As soon as I had finished reading English at Cambridge, I knew I wanted to do something different. On a first reading I didn’t really like this as an ...

Coolio!

Hello! The back of his skull throbbed like a whore's heart Not sure why a whore’s heart? Traditionally the consensus seems to be that whores don’t have hearts. A steady ...

Hello! The Eolaithe (EE - OH - LAY - TH) is a Science Fantasy novel. Set In the future after the War Of Peace that sent the world back to ...

Irsyad, I PMed you with some advice on that.

Not once upon a time, but a time very like, I saw a line of business men going to work in London town. Everyday they came and everyday I watched; ...

If you could shred this: I'd be so very grateful. It's for a contest, due in on Friday.