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Ouchie. But perhaps you could have made it a bit more ouchie? I dunno, but this was very good! :D Enigma did a very good nitpick, so I retreat. :D ...

Good! WD said the main stuff, so yeah, this was verra good! :D

Good, but a bit cliched.

Its very good, this!

Very good! :D The story's fine, and your grammer seems sound. “Battle wounds?” the shadow asked dryly, coming out of the shadows towards Cadenza so that it was apparent that ...

Shintoism, you haven't put on.

Whats with the brackets? It sounds confusing, so maybe its a good poem? :?

Nah, this aint cheesy! It's good! If it was cheese or fluff then Id say so, cos I hate both. Cant do a proper ntpk now, but one thing i ...

My point zigackly, Ofour.

Someone said that you should put your best on here - not your worst. Sure, do a rewrite if you think it needs it. :D

Neither. The bar of chocolate is mightiest.

Nice - very. Can't comment, but the clock was good. (Borrowers in the background, how.... fitting? Ironic? Weird? Dichotomisationing?) I think "stalk" is alright. Cats stalk. Walk haughtily. You could

S'cute. S'nice. Nuff zed. Nix itayall. I like the last line, and the rhyming (ryhming - swell!) went nicely. Listen to the Vogon that it's a good poem.

People are imperfect and we are made in His image....meaning he is imperfect. Which makes him and Satan equals. In his image, means physical form. The humanoid shape. And as ...

Thank you for reading! I'll try and edit accordingly...