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You need to say about Mantis' character, Siegfried. Marcus Finch: Blame "To Kill A Mockingbird" as I immediately think of a lawyer. Young, brown hair, meticulously about everything, and that ...

Alright, I take it back, it *is* fantasy and in first person. :wink: Vampires aren't my fav in fantasy, so I haven't read any books with them in. *waves cross, ...

Fantasy. Epic fantasy written in first person about some clique of mystical people, though considering your other stuff, JC, I doubt it's that. :wink: The title sounds definately attractive. :) ...

Now it's my turn to "EEEEK!!!" :D Don't worry, I've got the timeline all fixed up (well... sort of) and as the date of Holmes' birth is debatable I've tweaked ...

*starts humming "My Favourite Things* "Whips, slavery, racism, experiments on living and senitent subjects.. wait a minute doesn't that include my entire life?" ~The Raven "Being cold, being touched.

We Brits don't have a habit of celebrating our past defeats. :roll: You should watch "The Great Escape" - spells it all out in there. Potato anyone?

Chapter One: Closer Than A Brother Hunger. An all consuming force. Why , I thought, when the apple fell on Isaac Newton's head, did he think, "Aha! Gravity!”? Why not, ...

Phew! *wipes brow* Ta for fixing that, o fearless leader, my computing has been lacking with this site's absence!

Yup, you sincerely need to give this a thorough proof read. It's swarming with grammatical errors. On the other hand, it was interesting and original! Mice don't seem to get ...

Very good! Great, in fact, and I don't often say that. Because I'm me.... tee hee. Anyway, I do like this sentance a LOT: I am that shriveled corncob doll...but ...

:roll: I thought Natalie was being nasty and all. Got used to her being nasty... I want her to STAY nasty!!! :twisted:

Angsty novel about some tortured and twisted person who needs to make sense of what their life and family means. The ending will have a dark and dramatic twist conected ...

002:017 But of the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, thou shalt not eat of it: for in the day that thou eatest thereof thou shalt surely die. ...

WHAT? She stopped writing? No! I’m leaving, that wont change. Wont = won't. That was the only mistake, the rest of this was velly good!

Yup, they do, Nutty. :D Thin and humpbacked, but still cows... they're usually white with drooping horns. Ta everyone for commenting! :D