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Re: Fog - Part 9/10
“I need to find something for this . ” H e said. My mind was slowing at last as reluctantly she put her kindling-arms around my neck. Her what arms? ...
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Re: Fog - Part 8/10
No one knew what to say, the truckers found themselves back on a seat and Joe stood close to the door holding the shotgun like a sentry or a prison ...
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Re: Fog - Part 7/10
“There, someone’s out there!” T he boy of the couple said and we all followed his finger. Should be a small letter on “the” and “the boy of the couple” ...
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Re: Fog - Part 6/10
Hello! I had to hold Janey. We had two bodies... These two facts sound oddly connected. There was a way about how he eyed her, how his hand’s moved along ...
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Re: needing help!
Hey Kellis! Welcome to YWS! Don't worry about feeling lost. :) The site can seem kind of huge at first, but really it's incredibly easy to navigate, and if you ...
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Re: Fog - Part 5/10
Hello again! I looked back into the cubicle at his face. He was dead, not dying. The blood had seeped most of the way from his wrists to the door. ...
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Re: Hadrian's Wall: Legio VI Ferrata
Hi! Just letting you know that I upped the rating on this to an 18+ as you had a lot of strong swearing here. It's always best to rate too ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: British Universities
Edit - Also weather/climate!! Rain. :mrgreen: Seriously, prepare for rain, but also prepare for it to get really hot, then cloud over, then get kinda warm, then start raining. Apparently ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"My curved needles and goggles." ~Victor "The comb he gave me." ~Justine "My mother's necklace, Romeo and Juliet , that little glass swan and my wreath of dried roses." ~Elizabeth ...
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Re: Serpent's Teeth [3]
THREE ‘Mother’a Mercy,’ Kettlesing said. ‘And then what happened?’ ‘He told me to be ready to proceed at a moment’s notice, and then called for the maid to show me ...
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Re: Fog - Part 4/10
yo! “They’re birds . ” T he boy with the leather jacket said. “I can see them when they hit, they look like magpies, but magpies don’t flock, I don’t ...
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Re: Fog - Part 3/10
He offered me big money, I would have taken it, if Tara wasn’t ready-to-pop pregnant . This is a very crude image, and from what I’ve seen of Ross, it ...
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Re: Fog - Part 2/10
Yello! “I tell you one winter morning it didn’t get light until lunch time, and ‘dem Eskimos, sometimes they don’t see light for months . ” T he biggest one ...
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Re: Fog - Part 1/10
Hey Joshua! This is definitely the best thing of yours I read so far--it flows a lot easier than Thirty-One Days. ^_^ It did have a few wrinkles, but you've ...
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Re: Softness of Doves
Hi Amelia! Side note before I begin: you accidentally posted this chapter twice, so I deleted the unliked chapter for you. ^_^ A filthy shovel was slung at my feet. ...
Sep 14, 2011
