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Cool! Can I... *blushes* Can I be a fairy? *sucks thumb* I wanna be a fairwy!

"Follow your heart"? Oh please, that is so Mulan 2, Eragon, cheap, stero-typed fantasy theme. I don't follow my heart - I go by my gut feeling. My gut's never ...

How do you feel about the concept of "Gay Pride"? Gross, wrong and really, like Griffinkeeper said, isn't this supposed to be private? If you were going through town and ...

I don't know really. I have two female characters, but they're easy to write for, as they're perhaps a bit too much like me for their own good. Kit's an ...

I liked it, but it was perhaps a little too maudlin? I'm not saying the point you make was maudlin, just the way it was presented. Too melodramatic. Can't crit ...

Terry Brooks did it in itallics, so you could do that as well if you wanted.

He's going to die, isn't he? I don't whether I should be glad or sad at that, I really don't. It’s white and beige paint was beginning to chip , ...

I havn't written it yet!! It's in progress, but I've got the next chapter fully planned out, and the next one sketched out. And the whole story... I think this ...

Good beginning, but you don't really enage with the characters. You start off with Chris, then you throw random thingies in about the other characters. Concentrate on one character and ...

Good! And interesting. I've missed a chunk of this, so I've gotta go and catch up. I only noticed a few errors. Knall’s bright yellow eyes staring into the soft ...

Hi Psycho - I mean Psychic. ^_^ Seen you in the chat room, methinks? There seems to be lots of Naturo/Anime/Manga fans on here. Aren't they, quote, violent Japanese cartoons, ...

GREAT prologue! Wonderful "hook" to it - I want to read more, which is the whole point! There isn't much left for me to point out, but I did notice ...

Yay, been missing this, and I'm all out of touch with the story. I like Julius the way he is, don't change him. :wink: Sherman, after the Geezer noticed that ...

Man. Mary is insane. I don't think there's anything wrong with this, but get other people's opinion on it as well. All the lights in the house were on , ...

Good; I don't think there's much wrong with this chapter. Chapters sometimes become my favs for the oddest reasons. :) Whiperba chuckled and Brad watched the smoke drift across the ...