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Very nice. :D To be frank, I didn't think this was going to be very good, but it was - surprisingly so. Just this leapt out and bit my nose: ...

"The human race is amazing and terrible; indomitable and flawed. And I'm only half-human. Or a quarter, I'm not sure. I think I'm a quarter human." ~The Raven "I am ...

"I don't have any!" ~Fal "Ahem...." ~The Raven "Oh alright, I suppose I don't like hearing critiscm." ~Fal "I can be annoying. I find it difficult to let grudges go."[/] ...

Glack, can't wait till next chapter! Ambers eyes were filled with concern. Ambers = Amber's She was dressed in pajama’s, like she had rushed out of the house. Pajama's = ...

ROFL and LOL; and I mean the last one quite realistically. :lol: We're a "cult"? *splutters, sniggers and bursts appendix laughing*

Mormons are the same as Christians? No, they're not. They're an American "religion" that believe they're part of the children of Israel, I think, although where they dug that up ...

6/10 Deep but confusing; pithy but superflous. Lol, it's alright.

9/10 I like it, even though it isn't simple and easy to remember.

Oh, dubble post, but my one's the one with the question in.

"Don't intend on having any children, so the question doesn't arise." ~The Raven "Never thought about it. Do I need to?" ~Kit "Naming it after myself? How egotistical." ~Rohsair "If ...

"Never mind boys, what about the entire human race?" ~The Raven *mutters* "Cynic." ~Fal "She's got a point though!" ~Kit "Ouch! A point! *waves hand about in exaggerated fashion* So ...

Hehe, very funny! Parodies dont have to be strictly grammatical! :D

Woop! Cliffhanger, LOVE the cliffhanger! This was the only error I could find. A wind rustled the leaves that were only just turning red with the onset of autumn, and ...

*blinks* Didn't know K'ratcha had such a ... colourful past. You've been very quiet about him, Gyr. :) "He is insubordinate, he resists punishment, he stirs dissention among the other ...

To add conflict: Name: Yshvyt (pronounced: ISH-vit) Age: 23 Gender: Male Species: Ice Sprite Looks: Blue skin, black eyes with no whites, spiked white blond hair, blue veined wings like ...