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Blimey, all those comments on his page look like satirical reviews for bad fanfiction. "U so rock!!!!!! i luv u! u r AWESOME say hi to Saphira for me!! wen's ...

"My command, Samuel Garrison, is over about one hundred elves in the E.C. That's the airforce; E.C stands for Ebren-Chadyorä . That means Sky-Hunters in your tongue. I'm hoping for ...

Kitty did a wonderful nitpick and saved me a job, as there were quite a few grammer thingies in here. But the idea and story were both great! Spooky... I ...

"Politics. Whatever." ~The Raven "How boring can you get? Politics? Bunch of loonies with grey beards and attitude problems." ~Rohsair

"No one's ordinary. But Kit's un-fantastical. She's part of fanfiction that our author writes. And, Diego, you think you got problems with people trying to kill you? It's a heck ...

8/10 :) Good comeback.

Yuh, new character. :) Do I smell a relationship-to-be between Brad and Keira? :wink:

She felt her inner grammar Nazi dying. :lol: :lol: What's with the [s]strikethru[/s] bit's though? I understand what you're doing, but it looks a bit untidy. Could you do it ...

"I've been on the battlefield. I have my own command." ~Fal "I've seen it from a distance, and the aftermath up close." ~The Raven

I like Brownie best. :) “What about school?” H e asked, seated at the kitchen table. You do this several times! SMALL LETTER! h e prodded the stack of books ...

Nice action here. :) And good, Khor's coming to grips with stuff now. Knall glanced up to check and make sure the human had left , and turned around to ...

Chapter Three: Caravan When bad things happen, you comfort yourself with the thought that everything comes to an end. If times are bad, they can only get better; there has ...

Mary is mad. Completely mad. She pulled out of the hug, and met her mothers blue-green eyes. Mothers = mother's. Look out mistakes like this as they snatch the reader's ...

"He said the b word! He said the b word!" ~The Raven "We're blank-blank loonies, thank you!" ~Rohsair

Cool chapter and I like the Night Cats, nice and impressive. :) Deliberately turning her back to the breeze that carried the sounds of Brad's flight to them, she tucked ...