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Nice. Purt booflies! I liked it, but the crash bang boom, goodbye butterflies was abrupt. Where'd the butterflies go?

:roll: Is this thing dead before it even begins? I can't join until Tave and perhaps Jly get dumped on Liua.

Ooh, these chapters are so long, it makes it difficult to crit. But it seems to be good, so far. :) A glance up the street towards his destination and ...

My first thought was Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, then I realised it was the title of your panic attack story. It made me want to read it. Rohsair's Dreaming. ...

"No. Full stop. Cul-de-sac." ~The Raven "I'd rather not answer." ~Fal. "I half agree... sense is just as important. If you loose your senses, then life doesn't hold much." ~Kit ...

:roll: O man , I'm drowning in the trauma of requited love here. [/sarcasm] Evie celebrated her twenty-first birthday staying sober as ever. Change that to, by staying as sober ...

I liked it. Nothing to do with "The Fly" as was my first thought when reading the title. :) It sounded good to the Vogon's ears, but get another opinion.

Thank you for reviewing, sokool! As to the title, "Warp and Woof" refers to past and present interweaving over each other to make up Time. Like in cloth, the warp ...

Cool name, Sarah. :) Hope you like YWS!

Chapter Two: Double Take "Yes I am," the boy exclaimed. "I'm Sherringford Holmes. How did you know?" "Your... no, never mind, I'll show you. C'mon." "Where?" Sherringford asked suspiciously. "I ...

This was a very moving piece. And yes, it was effective; very effective. There were basically no errors to be corrected, all I saw was this, if I'm concentrating: “Hey,” ...

Yeah, good. Dreamer got the typo.

We got eight guinea-pigs, four chickens, two fish, one budgie and a milipede. Only the budgie (Blueberry) can be annoying, as he won't shut up sometimes. If I'm listening to ...

Be grateful, Kylan, you're getting two crits - one from Lady Pirate and one from me. Jeese, no one's critting my stuff, fanfic or ordinary and I don't whinge. Well, ...

Yup, I have. It was too small and local to merit a proper page with real details in it.