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Anyone know why Firefox tries to inform me that it's dialog not dialogue? It's American. Spelling difference. :roll: - With this, it was a bit difficult to tell what was ...

Very good ending! And good story; enter it, get it published, go the whole hog! Would Sig Saur have the SIG capitalized though? I've never seem it written like that. ...

8/10 Nice and true.

4/10 Cute, but not so cute. Rather, it's cute, but not my thing.

Very cool twist at the end - wasn't expecting that one at all. :D And, yes, take note on what Jabs said. Give this a reread and run the spell ...

I think it had enough conflict, but that's just my personal preference. :) Good, this, and Clau did the nitpick already.

I found this very good, and emotional; not scatter-brained at all. It was like a conversation - or a letter, and either way works fine. I lent one of my ...

Very good, although I don't get three-quarters of the politicial jargon and action here. I did like the repetition of Ali's thought I ma the hawk . Very effective. And ...

Romantic Fiction definately is not my fav, and there wasn't much of a plot to this. I know it's a short story and all, but it needs to have some ...

Well, "blimey" isn't THAT old. :roll: Certainly not as old as "gadzooks" or "oddsfish". Lots of people still say it. This story could be a Doctor Who episode. And, believe ...

Great! The way you described the pouring of the tea nd the drinking was fab; you really built up a picture of what it would look like. :) Only this ...

Oh nice. Emotional, not too soppy, just right. I like the touch about the nails being named. :wink:

Chapter Four: Trial Kasia's birthing was long and difficult. Haroun-rän ordered complete silence, and everyone crept about the camp, biting their nails and talking in whispers. Zara, the merchant's w

Wow, this is getting real good! Great! I don't want to crit - and there wasn't anything to nitpick anyway. Great job, and building the tension here. Not so sure ...

Yeah, I think it means that you can't put it on here, because other people will be able to see and read it. So putting it on here is like ...