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This reeks of cliche, sokool. :lol: I'm reminded of "I Capture the Castle" where one sister says that she'd "marry a chimpanzee if he had money" and the other responds, ...

6/10 I'd like to know what the "it" at the begining is.

*I* thought it was funny. I really did laugh out loud at the last lines.

A story about unrequited love. :roll: It makes me think of a wedding; it ends in tears, or doesn't even begin, with the groom running off, and the bride doing ...

I echo your wish for pictures of my characters, Gyr! I'd have a shot at this, but I can't draw images recognizable to anyone but myself.

Great! :D Are your characters really "trapped" in your head like that? :wink: With mine, it's more like they're having a great party that I'm hosting for them, and they ...

Oh my oh lawks oh MAN!! Wasn't expecting that bombshell, very nicely dropped on my unsuspecting toes. Nor had he expected the man to have an open bottle of brandy ...

Hi, Arieska! That's a neat name, never heard of it before. :D You've got a lot of M/Cs, I've only got four! Hope you like YWS! PM me if you ...

Oh, yes! I LOVE that book, and the old film. The new one looks rubbish. Blackberry as a girl? And with Rik Mayall and Dawn French as voices? It would ...

I'm enjoying this just as much as always. :) And Kiera was lying about her brother? Tut-tut. "Naughty, naughty. Little girls should play with nasty torture devices." Should = shouldn't? ...

Take the Doctor Who series as an example of this: the Doctor is honest, honourable, loving, etc, etc. But he also has a quirky sense of humour and calm exteriour ...

I thought this was better than the first draft. Brings out Jamie's violent side.

Chapter Three: Promise. Any jealous fears I may have had melted away during the next few weeks. Sherringford adapted easily to live under Mr Holmes' watchful eye, and even though ...

Uh, it isn't. You're mising HEAPS of quote marks, and you have too many commas in too many places to count. And when you have a paragraph you need to ...

"Fire. It can be surprisingly effective." ~The Raven "None. Well, my fists? That's the only one I ever use,but that doesn't really count." ~Kit "Swords. Fast and they always work." ...