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Dear Anger, I sympathize with your plight. The most popular method of anger control is as follows: 1. Go out and buy a cage of gerbils. 2. Keep the gerbils ...

"Being with Da and Kester in London. Being with Druth." ~the Raven "Being in Baker Street." ~Kit "The day I joined the E.C, and the times I spent with Lorlan ...

*the Raven draws a ring of fire and steps into it* "Teg tan, teg tan, teg tan..."

A story about a disabled girl who finds that she has a talent that wows everyone who meets her. Butterfly Kiss

:smt119 So, it was a.... dream? It happened in Lucas' dream, but when he got stabbed it happened in the dream and it happened in real life where Lucas was ...

VERY interesting! Reminds me slightly of "The Planet of the Apes". I didn't see many errors, but you need to space this out better. You've divided this up into three ...

Cool! That must be scary, having only 50 pages left. :smt080 Happy tweaking!

I don't think it was confusing; I got it. Tangles, tangles.... Brad and Kiera, Cat and the abducted Annie. :smt037 I saw only this: His excellent vision enabled him to ...

Thanks Cal, that site's really helpful! :D *gives cookie*

WHEEEEEE!!! Luverly!! And so nice - now Karenna's fitting in, and... wheee!! Nitpick? Well... The word exploded into CavernLights and Cerreno, who had screamed it, dropped to his knees next ...

Ok, I THINK I got this poem... I liked the stuff in bold, shows that the names mean something.

One of my characters gets beaten up, and during the ordeal, she gets hit above her left eye. This causes her to loose the sight in that eye. I know ...

Great! Flog me for not reading this before as I said I would. :smt079 All the teeny-weeny errors I saw have already been pointed out, so there isn't anything else ...

Never read any of Agatha Christie. Are they good? I prefer Doyle. Isn't Miss Marple some crazed old bat who has to be called in everytime the police can't solve ...

Clau got some good stuff here. The ending felt too rushed. For the first part, they're crouching, waiting, talking, and you're describing stuff in a leisurely fashion. Fine. But suddenly ...