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Bartemius doesn't fence!

Sheesh... :roll: You do a bloke a favour, and they say they don't need your help, thank you very much, and really I can tell myself how I can improve ...

I think the characters are more important the story. If you like your characters and want to keep them, then you can nix the rotten plot and make another one ...

LOVE forshadowing. It's like in the first Season of Doctor Who. Throughout the entire first season, they were dropping hints about "Bad Wolf"; little mentions that you forgot, but remembered ...

Wheee! *claps* Thank you for this, Snoink. I've read this before, but I understand it more fully now. Instead of "flaws", though, I think it might be better to call ...

"Just get Rohsair to spit on him. He'll be fine." ~The Raven *Rohsair lets a string of drool hang out his mouth and drops it on Marc's shirt. The drool ...

Rofl, those fairies' gifts! Yeah, do carry on, and PM me when you put the next part up, will you? As Syddles before me, I have only one thing to ...

I 'gree with all these except the journal one. I write nearly everyday, but it's my stories, not a journal/diary. I tried that once, and it was a disaster.

If this is Mercenary Wings, then on romance - Valery/deLucio. Kiera/Brad. Eric... Witcher Bubber! :lol: No, keep Eric single. I think YOU have to decide who to kill off, as ...

WOW! A *sandwich*! Got enough bread on the stuffing? :wink:

Chapter Four: The Worst of Times It should have been raining, with heavy, lowering clouds dropping buckets of rain and soaking everyone and everything in sight. This would have matched ...

"Let him die, he's not important." ~Rohsair "Cor, I can't believe you just said that." ~Kit "We all die sooner or later. What must be is what must be." ~Rohsair ...

*the Raven stops her humming and looks up* Keep your wig on, Johnnie. FYI, it's fire, not witchcraft. There's a difference, see?"

This is probally going to be hu mun gous waste of time, but even so, I occasionally get inspiration through hyperventillation. Here's where I'm going to twitter on about THIOBS ...

Touchingly tragic. But don't make it too touching, or it'll end up being soppy. I know that sounds like a contradiction, but... Maybe tragic, with a promise of hope to ...