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6/10 Pretty good. I like moving avvies.

It's dangling, dangling! What's dangling? The ending! So far, this looks good, and what little there is flows well. One sunny afternoon in a forest abundant with animals , a ...

9/10 Cute cat! [I decided to be moderate, and indulge another interest. I was getting too involved in LOTR.]

Maybe these complications arise because we are looking at them in the wrong way, or we just don't want to see them explained. And also what version of the Bible ...

I really don't know if I can continue with reading Lyla . I'm really sorry, Alainna, but it was brilliantly written, and I did enjoy the parts I read. Keep ...

ShadowTwit, you claim I am ignorant of the Bible, but this is just making me suspect you don't even know the 10 commandments. Lol, Sureal, did I say you were ...

Therefore, it's very unlikely that any of us will wind up bunking with the devil. The Ten Commandments are the basis of God's law, and for that matter, the laws ...

So, do you believe that I'm going to be tortured for all of Eternity for this? Yes. Because I do not believe that a god that loves humanity no matter ...

You're back, Yeah? So? Sorry. *pushes ego back into box* ^ 5/10.

3/10 Alright. The last two lines are good.

4/10 Dark and a bit fuzzy. What I can see looks almost cute.

I like, but I don't think every line needs to start with a capital. And this is probally me being uber thick, but I don't get these paragraphs: They needed ...

"Used by idiots who can't be bothered to use diplomacy." ~Rohsair *shrugs* "Necessary. It's best used in moderation, though. It has a tendancy to spiral out of control." ~Fal. "Sometimes ...

"We're back!" ~Kit "And no one noticed we'd gone. How typical." ~the Raven " Maa'lesh . Can't have it your way every time." ~Rohsair. "Too true. It wasn't Aval-lon, but ...

Everyone else picked out the very few errors. This was very enjoyable and very well written, but the behaviour of the baby isn't very realistic. She's a few weeks old, ...