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Those animals have no idea that what they are doing is wrong. It makes perfect sense to them, and they have a reason for doing it. Humans know when they ...

Meep: Evolution says we have one common ancestor. Why do humans sin, and not animals and plants?

Well, hi Lauren, I'm Twit. :D Hope you like it here and all that!

Congratulations, Twit. You're writing a cliche. Said cliche being... The Turquoise Scarab . I honestly don't know what to do. Do I keep Rohsair and scrap the plot? Do I ...

Sureal: How do you explain sin/bad things/crime?

Nothing left for me to pick out. How sad. :( But a GREAT piece, Misty. I know that's not helpful. I really like the descriptions as she destroys everything, but ...

Where about's are you in England, Kitty? Hands up everyone who lives in the UK! (And say whereabouts there you are, as well). I'm down in Kent, pinpoint as Charles ...

Thanky, Fire! :D

'Melia got everything in her wonderful nitpick, so there's nothing left for me to pick out! Except, yes, as sokool said, in the first chapter there was a bit of ...

Keep it the way it is and don't even consider "lesbian action". You'll spoil a good piece of writing. Your characters could be rounded a bit more, but if you're ...

As to where all the matter came from: we have no idea. It may simply have always just been there. So you accept that matter may have been there all ...

Well, duh, we were saying about how it must have come from somewhere. Doesn't just pop out of thin air.

The offspring of parents without said mutations. But where did said parents of the first itty-bitty specks of matter come from?

It looks nice, but it's also a tad boring. Do like kitty said and put more oompf! into it.

Fire is a chemcial reaction, oxidation, it didn't evolve or anything similar, it just is. In the way that God "just is"? :) Looks like you did some intense research ...