Twit

Jabberwocky

"Fist? *punches Diego hard* That suit you?" ~Fal "Ugh, the werewolf's come back, How utterly grotesque." ~the Raven

"A simpleton? " ~Fal. "Uh oh..." ~the Raven *flaming with rage* "Samuel Adams, tý haben na eccem pyth tý tem kewselgül ag. Tý tem i-juta ag mykensakensa üghelä! Týr bavynä ...

"No. I serve my king." ~Fal. "Filial and patriotic both. The king's his dad." ~the Raven "Alright... I'm a hundred years in your future. You're dead when I'm alive..." ~Kit ...

Untrustworthy

Braces

If it's Victorians in the 1860s, then you could read the book about the Elephant Man - it goes into detail about the setting and all. Zulu is a good ...

"Party?" ~Rohsair "The Elemental Dances at the new moon! There's Air-Dancers, Fire-Dancers, Water-Dancers and Earth-Dancers, and they all have their unique patterns. We stay up all night celebrating.

"Who's retarded?" ~the Raven "What's retarded?" ~Kit *to Kit* "It's an insult, I think" ~Fal. "What's the biggie, anyway, Marsipan? You're going to DATE someone - how stupider than that ...

T error, H orror, E xcitement, M ystery! THEM! *ahem*. Sorry, I'm not joining, just wanted to say that. Oh yes, and to extend my sincerest good wishes for the ...

Wolf's Rain! My one and only anime-love. For the present, anyway. Typical, I start a welcome and talk about myself instead.. :roll: *starts again* Hi Mezer and welcome to the ...

Cool! No nitpick, sorry, but Azila already did a *whizz-whizz* pikthru. Very well writ, and very thoughtful. I didn't get what was happening until the last line, and it's good ...

Plumber

10/10 Very pithy and applicable

Woo. Very good, and the present tense is fine. :D "He knew that I couldn’t just let you go after you dishonored him," she continues, examining the gleaming metal in ...