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Man, I wouldn't have liked that at all. And no, I didn't get it, and probally wouldn't have done. All I could think of was the popcorn chicken they do ...

I'm the only one online!!

Pol, this is very, VERY long. That makes it difficult to read. And even skim-reading, I can see that you're still doing that thing with the capitals and full stops ...

Ooh, this is so long! I don't really have time to read it all. Could you break it down into more, smaller chapters, and then PM me when you have? ...

Thank you both for reading! And, yes, Azure, this is *just the beginning*. ^_~ This is like the pilot episode; hopefully in the future there'll be more short stories of ...

:shock: Lummee, didn't expect that. But yes, this needs to be moved to "Fantasy". You need to space this out though; 'tis Text Chi, as Sumi says, and using it ...

Finally! My Duel Entry, and the first appearance of the Changers is up! Namely, here, :roll: This only has Falcon and Dolphin in it, and it goes waaaaay back, to ...

"There is no use in trying," said Alice. "One can’t believe impossible things." -- Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland ‘The corn is getting higher. Will it be ready for harvesting ...

10/10 LOL!!

There's nothing left for me to pick out here - everyone else dun it. (Sorry I didn't get to this earlier - really sorry). Really, everyone else said everything I ...

Personally - this is just me, so don't change it - I don't like the style of narrating that you've chosen. The distance from the reader and the character is ...

Havn't got time to read the chapter (very sorry) but can I crit the map? ^_^ Very good, but add more colour. At present 'tis a touch boring. You don't ...

Aw, Dark Magik, you going with the Sword In the Stone-old grouch-bearded venerable type Merlin! :evil: Ahem, sorry, shutting up.

Mary Jones. Our topic for this evening. We once read a book about Mary Jones - the girl who saved up for six years to buy a Bible. A good ...

No, it's 666 that's the number of the beast.