Twit

Dude, sweet . So wait, each war is two hours? So that means writing for two straight hours? o_O

Hello! Sorry I’m rather late to this. Okay, so I’m not going to go through and pick our things on a sentence level, but rather talk about the whole thing. ...

Currently my issues are that I'm filling in gaps here and working around half a novel already. Huh, that's funny. That's exactly what I'm doing. :)

I've met gyrfalcon and Kitty15! Both years ago, though. It's a pity we're all so spread out. We ought to have a YWS convention or something.

Actually, the boy thing isn't a very good argument, cos you do get guy makeup and all. And, imho, it's not girly for a guy to wear concealer if it ...

So if anyone's revisiting this, is it a blast from the past for you? A wee bit, yes. :mrgreen: I wear a lot more makeup now, but mostly just eyeshadow, ...

"That would be rather odd, seeing as I look quite a bit like my mam. But... I don't know. I suppose I'd be upset. A bit." ~the Raven "What does ...

Feet

Yello! First off, I didn't like this idea at all. Talking heads don't make something a script. In a script there's stage directions and everything is very visual. Here, you ...

Hello confetti! Thanks for requesting a review, and sorry it’s taken me a while to get round to it... Uni is, as ever, a pig. I think, maybe, your subtlety ...

Oh golly, all those legs. O_O

The apple never falls far from the tree, and I believe (i must believe) That my fruit is infinitely better, and sweeter, than the old. If you say the fruit ...

Hey croissant! (Now that's a sentence I don't get to type much.) Welcome to YWS! Basically, at our heart, at our core, if you peeled and divided us like an ...

Hello! Shooing the furry culprit away from the scene of the crime, I received a hiss for my effort before procuring the damaged article. This is very vague language. “Furry ...

Hi Arciade! Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you like harsh critiques; you should fit right in. :mrgreen: See you around! -twit