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"It's always he , his , him . Do you have any idea how complimented and insulted you made me feel, Diggy?" ~the Raven "It is surprising." ~Fal. "To make ...

I AM going to do it... I hope.

Choke

Good, but I didn't quite get the last stanza. Maybe that's because I'm stupid. :razz:

4/10 Hm.. alright.... :?

Gee. Now of all the stupid things I've done, I don't think sticking batteries up my nose has been one of them. Eating woodlice, sure. Batteries? Nope. Nothing to crit ...

NaNo must be really fun/awesome/heartbreaking/backbreaking/mendbending. *sigh* In November, though I'll be uber busy with studying and coursework and all, so... No. Maybe if there's a JuNo in July or

I have to pick music for my death scene? How macabre.

Pretty good. :) Romance, though... Well, anyway. :roll: For she knew in her heart he would never be hers Hers = her's You need more punctuation. You don't have any ...

Ditto what everyone else has said, especially about critting other stuff first. But this was very good! I wasn't expecting the ending. And sad too, how the girl didn't get ...

Good! Yes, I think it should be moved to Narrative. Drop a Mod a PM. It read more like a story than anything, which might make some people say you ...

You're welcome. ^_^ First of all, weird spacing. Second, this was well written and interesting! :D Third, Through the split doors strode a man, tall, lithe and [s]deft[/s]; If he ...

Well, no comment on subject matter, but this was very well written. Especially this bit: She wraps herself around me in what she probably thinks is a hug, but it ...

LOL!! I really like this poem. :lol: Funny, and a good original idea. ^_^

I didn't see anything wrong with this - 'tis very good! :D You're going to use this in real life? Hope it goes well.