Twit

Cool! Nazi apple... :roll: This is your NaNo thingie to do with Auschwitz, right? I think you mentioned an apple someplace else. Nice, and I like the shading.

Ooh, Bush is bad enough straight. :roll: I had to snicker at this line: “I never told anyone, but my job is to tell ya’ll the truth, and here I ...

Yes, the ending was a tad rushed, but the action in the middle wasn't rushed. Good! I didn't see any grammer mistakes or nothing, so very good! Am I glad ...

You can try showing how the character enjoys causing pain. Emphasize his glee at hurting them. That's more like being sadistic. Hatred has been compared to like a slow fire. ...

I thought it was rather a good beginning, actually. :) Now for grammer and stuff! (*groansigh*) He flipped a switch and saw his mother sitting at the table in a ...

Man, Goldie, twenty-three ? Which one do you like best, which one can you get most info on, which one can you put up with dominating your mind for a ...

I must be some sort of freak: I love research (and character development, and editing). You're not a freak, I'm just the same!

I'm going to change mine! Drop the "shadow" and make it a variation of "twit".

Nice and dusty. It should be a Western galaxy what with the dustyness and all. :wink:

Dislike - That you're a better critter than me. >.< Love - You're Kitty! You consider me a friend! You're one of the busiest critters we have on YWS!

He's there, he's there. How could I have missed the King of Poll Options? :roll:

My siblings and YWS. The rest of the people I know rarely know I am a writer. O_o Me too. :roll:

Where this came from, I don't know. :roll:

Nice; I like your poetry. :D The middle stanza seems a bit out of sorts with the rest of the poem. The first and third deal with the dagger image, ...

Very dramatic. :) It's good, but a few spelling mistakes and such. Your ivory skin shined in the moon light Shined = shone I'm a herione but I have no ...