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"Long black hair, gold eyes, uneven eyebrows, pointed ears. Short and small. Average for a half-breed, I guess." ~the Raven "Short black hair, gold eyes. Fairly tall, I suppose, about ...

9/10 Good... but who *is* braylynn alexa? And, coincedentaly, if she's related to you, then neat pun on "on the way". :lol: Via = way.

The next chapter of THIOBS is nearly finished. "All Flesh Is Grass". If you ever need to write a whipping scene, then the lash first makes a weal on the ...

Um... I don't quite understand this...

Yes sir. *does so immediately*

I think I liked this draft better. It flows better, and it's less "emo-teen" -ish. ^_~ You're missing some punctuation, but I have no idea how punctuation works in poetry, ...

Here's me! Add me... please? :wink:

Rofl! Wonderful! I once wrote a piece like this for a Randomness Contest, but this was funnier!! Spiderman, Cap'n Jack... LOL!!!

Aw, Kaz, I liked you as Kaz! *sniffs for the departed Kaz*

Used to be ShadowTwit, now I'm twit with a funy symbol at each end.

Claire or Kirsten. I think they all sound fine.

Quite nice. :) Some of the rhyming felt a bit stiff, like the words were only there for the rhyme, like here: Sorry's no cure, so let me go, let ...

This should really have gone in the Help forum, not the Randomness forum. The "Help forum"? Haven't seen that anywhere. :roll:

He was probably apart of Hitler's Children or whatever it was called. Hitler Youth? As soon as I find out, I'll send you the author, Clau. I think there was ...

Is this Non Fiction or a Book Review?