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Re: Gypsie Eyes
I didn't read the bit before this! Shock and horror! Without a word Tannar stepped forward, splaying his long, blue fingers around the wound he had inflicted. His large, glowing ...
Oct 17, 2007 -
Re: TIOBS III
Chapter 6: All Flesh Is Grass Sherringford was able to sit up without too much pain the next day, and he had eaten his breakfast with a show of good ...
Oct 17, 2007 -
Re: painting, please critique
Whee, that's so well done! It looks really pro. The only thing I'd say is that the pciture is a bit out of focus. :roll:
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #2
No, not rape... What father would rape their child? You'd be surprised at how many do just that. Look on the BBC website sometime. Sad, but true. But how can ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Pirates
That is great! I didn't notice the lines until everyone else pointed them out. ^_~
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
"'es a dog. . Ain't that obvious? How many people d'yu know as would come up to you and lick yer 'and?" ~Harry "Well, I might." ~the Raven *snickers* ~Rohsair ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"No." ~all Do you accept critiscm?
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
*ever so slightly smug* "Our writer's busy with ME now." ~Harry "What a waste of time." ~the Raven "I'm 'er NaNo thingamajig. So, hullo to everyone. It could be us ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: The Dance of The Butterflies by James Goh
Good, but it was a bit confusing... I think that's me being dense, though. :? :)
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #2
Why doesn't she run away? Call Childline? Tell someone? This last week, the day before school had started, her father had come home drunk, and pulled a gun of the ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Naming your characters...
This, my first NaNo is set in Victorian times, so I can have weirdish long names, so long as they're actual names. :roll: And because I'm trying to use imagery ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Isn't Being Alive the Greatest?
Rookies! Life's wonderful!... Most of the time, anyway! :D *munches triple chocolate cookies*
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Pen name?
My surname's rather distinctive, so I think I'll use that. Even if I am a loser, having a weird name on the spine of a book might inspire people to ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: A Tragic Tale of Young Epic Romance, Eragon, etc.
Hillarious! ... and I know that's not helpful. But it was! You LIKED Eragon? Seriously? Without sarcasm? That much?
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Chapter 1: Sudoku and Suitcases
Very amusing! ^_^ Till got all the stuff that I didn't even notice. It was amusing and well written, but who is the other person you're writing with?
Oct 13, 2007
