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^ Needs to look a little further for the former okapi < Ought to be concentrating on Stray instead of the writer of Vivaldi's Season's sonnets who is showing altogether ...

Interesting! Pretty good beginning, if a touch too info-dumpy, but I guess that can't be helped. Was it intentional that you gave the boy a name that's an insult as ...

Muffins, muffins everywhere, but never a crumpet to eat. Hi, welcome, aloha, wilkommen, shalom, greetings, salutations, wotcher... So many words, all meaning more or less the same thing. Words, words,

I'm not going to make it. I'm just so tired . Not of the story - just the writing and the counting and reading everyone else's wonderful word counts. I ...

"A soldier? *pokes Fal* Go talk to your fellows, Fal. And see if Kit's friends are around." ~the Raven "Another soldier?" ~Harry "My thoughts precisly." ~Rohsair

(I'm guessing female?) American. Big glasses, kind of a nerdy. The sort who'd draw maps of Middle Earth in their Maths notebook. Harry Fletcher

This would be in December? If you would promise to be really, really harsh, then I'd really like it if you could edit Stray . :) It's set in 1887, ...

Go to the Index. At the top, above the forums, you should see a list of options in small print. Among them is "View Your Drafts and Posts". Click on ...

9/10 Hehe, I like it, even though I'm not sure why...

Harry Fletcher: A boy from the type of family labelled by Henry Mayhew as "struggling costermonger" solves the mystery of Spring-heeled Jack, etc, etc, etc. What do I love about ...

Gold. But yes they look a bit too much like some weird anime character's eyes.

Are the names of chapters included in the word count? If so, then I have hope. All my chapters begin with, "In which..." :roll: Thus I have, "In which Lissa's ...

I managed to write a page. Swell. 148 words. Wery wunterful, I'm sure. And now I've written another page and two words. Swell. :( I'm going to fail ... Gee, ...

Good first person. I'm biased in favour of first person, so it's nice to see you branching. :) As to the endings... The first ending showed the fact of Ms ...

Word count: 1533 Mines like the worst! I know.. I feel that I won't have enough words! You're better than me. I think I've got about... 250 words? If that. ...