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Type it up here, don't put it as a document for us to download, that isn't the way it works. By the by, what's "SN" stand for? What's your fic ...

You need to write the story up on here, not put it up as a download. Copy and paste it into here from a Word document or whatever. And try ...

It's a bit too dark, and I can't see it properally. :(

Even though I don't get the whole "Boa" thingie, I thought this looked nice. Small and cute-y. :)

Rust! The pink makes you look like some demented Barbie doll. :wink:

Nice Friesan!

Splendid! I'm useful for Dr Suess questions, but that's about it! :roll: :lol:

I liked it! It was too soon- it hurt too much for her to hold her mothers jewellery. Mothers = mother's Her mothers voice filled her ears; words of comfort, ...

Well, that's a new subject. ^_^ Maybe you should add speech marks for the cafe boy's words?

*the Raven puts her hands together, then twirls them apart. A thin ribbon of fire writhes between her palms, and she makes it longer and longer, then snapping it, quickly ...

I got second week blues even before the first week had finished. Now I'm in-the-middle. I know I need to catch up, but on the other hand, I counted up ...

Like what everyone else said, very good, and mae carnen for winning the contest! :D Just a few things that I really noticed: A flicker in the corner of his ...

Interesting. :) Just be sure to avoid making the Miokoda so invincible they're Mary-Sues. I know what you said about the hemlock, but maybe add in other stuff as well? ...

Most Like A Monkey: Sumi Most Likely to Invent a time machine: Sam

"What? Another werewolf? Jeez, why are you even discussing them? They're flaming atrocities, and I don't give a monkey's who hears that." ~the Raven "They are rather popular, it seems." ...