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Re: Snow!!
We don't have any hills for sledding. ^_^ Anyway, I know it's a bit... but it's still fun!
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Hands That Know How to Give Love (and then some)
LOL! Apart from all the bad language, I liked this just as much as the first one. What I'd consider changing, apart from the all the bad language, is the ...
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Re: Character dialogue
"You want sci-fi? Isn't fantasy enough?" ~Fal. "I hate this part..." ~Kit *the Character Vortex opens with a noise like the TARDIS, and all the Changers fall through* "Hi, it's ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Snow!!
Gee, snow already?? :shock: We so rarely get enough snow here. Me and my little brothers have made only one proper snowman in our entire lives, and it's only recently ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Mother and Child
That's pretty good! The baby's expression is rather vacent, and the mother's hand is a bit big and too short, but overall, it's very good! :D
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Why is...
I've graduated from pecking it all out with one finger, but I don't use the Mavis Beacon way of putting my fingers on the key board. I tried her, and ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: just 'cause
It's like Shakespeare and other people would say, "o'er" and "wak'd" to make it flow better. Too many syllables makes it clunky, like.
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
*dangerously* "I hope that by 'what's his name' you did not mean me." ~Fal. "Who? You? What's your name again?" ~the Raven "I think Alex meant Eramus and Vetus. It's ...
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: Why is...
There's always words that I type wrong if I'm in a hurry. Flame comes out as flmae if I'm not careful. The as teh, an old favourite. But "were" is ...
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal: Coming In Print Soon!
Too late now, I guess. I didn't get to properally think about this until a few days ago. *hits self*
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Stultus? Isn't that "stupid"?" ~Kit
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: It's Hot In Topeka
Give me night... or give me Blucher.
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Vegeta - Dragonball Z
Woah, spiky haired dude on the loose! Sorry, not very helpful. The muscles and the ears look good, but the hairline is... odd. I'm not sure how to describe it ...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Joanna McKylie (Final)
Very good! The second one's best. For some reason, she has me thinking, "Now you're hip!" :roll:
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Dragons - You're Needed!!
We're doing badly in the quiz. :roll: Come on guys, I can't always get on at that time! And while I'm not trying to hint that I'm a winner, it ...
Nov 14, 2007
