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Chapter Eleven: Fair Play Bird was dead. The news left me feeling cheated, somehow. I had wanted to see him brought before Mr Holmes and the police in rags and ...

5.5/10 It kind of works... but then it sounds like it shouldn't. :?

Lol! :lol:

10/10 Lol! That last bit is very Jack Sparrow...

"The Queen. Woot for royal company! Though she isn't such a great conversationalist..." ~the Raven "Iolo." ~Clover "Ah... everyone else in the Company, I guess." ~Iolo "Dai, my family, Codahuti." ...

I read all the other parts of this and really enjoyed them. As critiques consisting of, "This is awesome! I didn't see anything wrong with this great story! Write more ...

"Absolutely brilliant. The first quote is by one of my favourite comedians... though there were some *cough* unwelcome additions as well... The second is by one of the most amazing ...

*the Raven sneaks up behind Elayna and snitches the penny* "Money!" "Hello! I like money!" ~Clover "Pretty penny..." ~Rohsair *bathes the penny in flame* "Ooh! Shiny!" ~the Raven "It burns!" ...

"Nowhere else to go, except stay where I am now." ~Kit "The past! That's not allowed? Why not?" ~the Raven "I'd go on Codahuti and just... fly, I guess." ~Fal. ...

This is Word Asociation... and there's already a thread for it. This word reminds me of...

Willy Wonka

There's such a difference between not going on YWS because you're exercising self discipline and denial and not going on because the site's down. >.

I saw my thingiebobbie up there! :shock: ... Only once, though. :wink: Very cool wotsit.

Chapter Four ‘They came, the birds flighting the dark, Hundred on hundred, a king’s army. They landed on the water, a fleet of ships, Of king’s ships, proud with silver, ...

The Doomsday Machine by Catherine Webb and I'll be starting Joy in the Morning by PG Wodehouse after that. *drools happily*