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  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    "Do you think 'The Magpie' would suit me?" ~the Raven "Just Scavenger would do fine." ~Fal. "Ooh, that hurt. No wait, actually it didn't. Yah!" ~the Raven "Ask the Queen." ...

    Apr 23, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler

    I thought they were pretty good before I read LOTR properally and saw A New Hope. Maybe some people see Eragon as a mushed up version of "classic" sci-fi and ...

    Apr 23, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Flashbacks—any tips while writing them?

    I think you should only use a flashback if the scene is powerful enough. That's what I've read, and I think it makes sense. And as Vernon said, itallics and ...

    Apr 23, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Violin. Just... because of... you know." ~Kit "You'd get bored with it. The music of my voice. I listen to it often enough already." ~the Raven "Hans Zimmer. Dramatic and ...

    Apr 23, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 1

    Really, really good! I honestly couldn't find anything to shred. Well, maybe there was something, but I was enjoying it too much to notice. You have a very easy style, ...

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: deleted

    Very nice! Nice imagery and description. Only, shouldn't it be "hermit crab"? Or is it an abnormally clever joke that I'm too thick to see? ^_~ Skimming the top , ...

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    "That's what I mean. Yuck." ~Kit "Yes, Major Bat Guano, if that really is your name." ~Clover "Sathi once said my hair looked like a porcupine. That's like a hedgehog, ...

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Back Up And Running (April 22, 2008)

    I can't seem to post anything. >.< EDIT: Wait, this got posted? It said it didn't. :?

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Oprah Winfrey

    Is this debate about Oprah or religion? Just asking, because if it isn't, it ought to be. About Oprah, that is.

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    "Beauty is so over-rated, don't you think? So many people think that beauty can be seen only in someone's face or in a picture or flower, when in fact it's ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Yep." ~the Raven "Kind of..." ~Fal. "Of course not!" ~Kit "If I tried, I probably could." ~Rohsair "Ew, no." ~Iolo "No. I'd like to learn some cool types." ~Clover Can ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost in Freedom

    Very neat... and dramatic. ^_^ I can imagine this as a song with a very strong beat that I'd play over and over. Yes, that means I like it. :roll: ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    "She means face-paint. Makeup." ~Rohsair "Only baaaaad women wear face-paint!" ~the Raven "Well, some others do too, but still... You wearing it is just..." *makes a grossed out face* ~Kit

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Danny Elfman. And other people who write really loud, beating, powerful music." ~the Raven "John Williams, Hans Zimmer, Mozart, all the favourites." ~Clover "Violins." ~Kit What would you do if ...

    Apr 21, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    "Sloveen? Slitheen , you mean." ~Clover "Pronounciation nazi." ~the Raven "Lip gloss? Like, paint? That's yuck ." ~Kit *eye roll* "Move with the times, Kitkat." ~the Raven "But it is!" ...

    Apr 21, 2008


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