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In addition to Rache's points, I'd add that it's not necessary for us to know everything about a character's appearance. A rough idea, yes, but we don't need to know ...

To kid themselves that the awfulness only lasts a year instead of a lifetime. Why would a computer explode into frogspawn and daises when poked?

Bellboy? Porter?

7/10 Coolio for the Avatar reference, less so for the self-reference.

I have a request. It's called... VictoryFREEDOMBob .

Done everyone!

Wow. I'd never knew of modifiers before, much less that they could dangle. Very interesting and helpful article, Rachael!

Hi minimin! Welcome to YWS! Here is definitely the place for constructive abuse, lol. If you have any questions or need any help navigating the forums or need a critique, ...

Yeah, that's really, really rushed. It feels like you didn't know what to put in the beginning, so decided to write stuff and get it out of the way as ...

But why does it have to fit with the girl's name at all?

Why does the guy name have to go with the girl name? Names don't have to go with each other; names just are. Choose any name you like! Just not ...

Leeroy Jenkins.

Tone kind of happens without one realising it. Everything has tone, but it's getting it right that takes work. Like babymagic said, you need to fit the mood to the ...

Welcome back Sepherene! The site's changed a lot in the past few months, so I'm guessing it's different to when you left. I don't think it's all fully back to ...

Hi Stan! Welcome to YWS! 60s, 70s, 90s music... Do you have a problem with the 80s, lol? What kind of bands do you like from those decades? If you ...