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The bit of text under the name, above the avatar. You don't have one. What're doing in here?

The first is pretty good, just a bit squashed. The second is the worst, as it looks quite flat. The third is the best, as the girl looks great and ...

Oooh, forbidden love. 'What did your parents call you?' Midge asked. 'Nose ointment,' I replied. The Raven, no less.

Nice! The names are fine, and the references and all. Grammatically and structurely it was great, but it was a bit confusing in parts. The bit when the three are ...

The first: 10/10. Paolini's logic. :roll: The second: 4/10. A quote, I'm thinking? A quote that I don't know. >.

2/10 I'd like to praise you for finding such a unique word to put in your Custom Title. But my parents aren't happy when I don't tell the truth.

Why are everyone's characters so good-looking? It's only the pretty people who put their fizzogs on the goggle-box.

I focus too much on dialogue Write a play.

*Clover closes her eyes* "Don't talk. Movie hangover." "It was just a movie ." ~the Raven "Don't tell me you never got this way after watching House season finales." ~Clover ...

"Me. Duh. What else should I say?" ~Clover "We're kinda handicapped by the fact that Clover's the only one who goes to school, and our writer has, as yet, no ...

You have serious paragraph shortage. Maa'lesh , it happens to everyone. You do not need romance. Seriously. To quote Laurence Olivier... Well, perhaps I'd better not. Little pitchers at the ...

Do you have any BBQ sauce to make both look good?

Into roses or violas?

"Cool, word association." ~the Raven "No, I meant a comedy sketch." ~Clover "Like the Mr Burmie one?" ~the Raven "By the same. It's an English teacher talking to one of ...

"Of shoes and ships and ceiling wax, and cabbages and kings! And why the sea is boiling hot, and whether pigs have wings!" ~Clover "Poetry. Nice." ~Rohsair *Clover snickers* "Sketch."