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Chapter Seven ‘Heigh ho, heigh ho, it’s off to work we go.’ –The Seven Dwarfs I rocked on my feet impatiently outside Resek’myr’s quarters. The cold wind whipped down my ...

Uh... *blinkblinkblink* I see dead people... Well, one dead person. She doesn't look desperately deceased, though. As she - the dead bird - is hanging off the ledge (I can ...

Lol - still it's nice to be supported by reactions, sa? And you're purple! Congrats on the romance scene as well. I have no idea how I'm going to get ...

Oh darn. This is what I get for not reading other people's first to see how teh awesome ones did it.

Coo - interesting. :D It was very enjoyable and easy to read, and your style was fine, with just a few tweakings needed. My first day of kindergarten, a kid ...

9/10 Yes, let's. I'll bring the inflatable mouse trap and the chocolate covered TARDIS.

Last time it was for Action/Adventure writers, now it's for Fantasy writers. Where do we head for next time, Captain? Raxacoricofallapatorius for the Sci Fi peeps?

2/10 Uh... whatever (in the nicest possible way, of course). And you spelt disease wrong.

6/10 'Vette... Corvette? Like the car? Meh.

Nice, but I hate the tear. Make the tissue between the spikes look more veiny - like a bat's wings, and add shading to the spikes. I like his eye ...

Madame Lokskrip, a formidable woman with flaming red hair and rather too-large a nose, paced back and forth in front of her pupils, eyes flashing like those of a general ...

"Food, glorious food..." ~Fal. "Fried jelly and custard." ~the Raven "Ew, fried jelly?" ~Clover "Mm, custard." ~Iseabail *pause* "I have a question." ~Lorlan "Shoot." ~the Raven *Clover snickers* "How

"Has anyone?" ~Iseabail "What is the fullest anyone can live to?" ~the Raven "Well, I'd say I was fairly successful..." ~Micklewhite "For myself, I think there's always things one could ...

Hint: Improve your punctuation, don't use caps for emphasis, and never ever ever post "Please review my work!" in your title.

It felt like giving birth. How do you know what...?