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Awww... *goes all gooey* When Mommy and Tim fight, I go outside and sit by the pile. When I first read that, I was like, Pile? Huh? What pile? Perhaps ...

Like Meep said, yank on the hair as a whole and it hardly hurts at all. Pulling out one single strand just hurts a tiny bit. It's when you grab ...

ROMIL: Kindly inform my daughter that her hybrid has wet my bed. :roll:

"I was a birthday present. How often does that happen?" ~the Raven "I went back and forward at the same time." ~Iseabail "My Seeing. I will never, ever regret my ...

I liked it, it was well written, but you use archaic language, and that always makes me break out in lumps. See here, the language is great. To the point, ...

“Well,” he said, “what do you want?” Coo, um, cheeky much? Jataal tossed Tannar the broadsword he’d admired the other day. Contractions aren’t necessary and shouldn’t be used. “What do

Done, BBB!

The prologue reminds me too much of the beginning of each Animorph book. ‘Keep reading because only that will save you,’ type thing. Nothing bad with that, just something to ...

Is this the published version? Because, not to be crushing, but there's rather a lot of mistakes in there. Did you have an editor?

Known for almost always being the member below me.

"No one and everyone. Quennel and Romil." ~the Raven "Elizabeth. *chuckles* When I've done something like left a smoking pipe on the chair arm cover." ~Micklewhite "Sersurans." ~Fal. "Hybrids. Oh ...

Not enough flaws. Flaws are what makes a person real. Any character starts out with a big virtue - they're a character, and you're going to be telling us about ...

Wuthering Heights stank. Stinks. Stunk. It was completely unbelievable, all about people destroying themselves for love. Catherine decides that she won't marry Heathcliff, but she has to destroy herse

Known for always being the member above me in this game.

"I wouldn't die, kill, cheat, steal, take drugs, get drunk, lie, watch Grey's Anatomy or deceive someone into thinking that they hadn't got cancer when they had. I might make ...