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Yay, congrats! :D Your story reminds me a little of that David Niven film "A Matter of Life and Death". ^_^

8/10 Lolish, but not as funny as your others.

I have absolutely no idea how to crit this synopsis. Ai yi yi... Karenna, overwhelmed by this sudden revelation, to say nothing of the responsibility laid on her shoulders , ...

But for now they scattered back to town, called home for lunch by the tolling of the town square’s bell tower. This is very nitpicky, but perhaps you could mention ...

La, aren't we tragic creatures? :lol: If I didn't write things down, I'd forget them. Ergo, I'm a writer.

Sara had her hands inside the bowels of the printer, like a doctor handling the heart of a surgery patient with blood-slippery fingers . Fantastic image, but this is perhaps ...

1st: 3/10 Neat link. 2nd: 6/10 Ah. Yes. I totally understood that.

I only mentioned it twice. :razz: So, your sigs from "the Point." When I find out what that is, I'll give you a wonderful high rating, but for now, 5/10.

The cat is the best artistically, I think. The way it stands out clearly, and the background's kind of faded out is very good. Personally I like the second picture ...

According to Wiktionary, using an e is the Yank way, and without an e is the Brit way.

First part: 8/10 because it reminds me of the hanging minister sketch. -2 because it isn't exactly from the hanging minister sketch. Second part: 10/10 Nice. Overall: 9/10

Banned for having a sig that makes me wonder how far a minister can fall. Without a dog collar.

6/10 Ah, poetry. It chases its tail a little bit, but mad kittens and puppy dogs ftw.

Banned for giving really helpful comments on Scavenger.

Thanks, Rabbit!