Twinkle4ever

Hello! Okay, I don't know if anybody's mentioned but Ariel doesn't have a mouth or maybe it's not clear. But anyway, ALL four drawings are really adorable. Every drawing is ...

Hello! Amazing poetry. The way you've described the fireworks is just amazing. And I love it that you've written 'seizures of color, explosions of light' repeatedly. :) It is not ...

I like the lines 'I won't love you forever, I want to love you today.' Although it can be changed to 'I'd rather love you today' if you like. But ...

I like this kind of art. And you've done a great job. This is the first time I've heard of an art like this but I am definitely going to ...

Neat! The pair looks looks like it's about to be blown away. I like that. Nice work with oil paints. You used all the bright colors. I would suggest doing ...

It looks so cute! Parhaps even one of the cutest things I've ever seen. :) I love it. Keep it up! :)

I love this photo. It's a projection of peace and it's so beautiful. I think the half flower looks awsome. I'm not sure it would have looked better if you'd ...

Hi again, The first drawing isn't really clear but I think the person looks sad in it. Yellow looks a lot better in the second one. It's as if the ...

Chapter 2: A Strange Encounter A week had passed and Vanessa’s brother and sisters had left with Clover to go back to their base and complete the unfinished assignments. Everyone ...

I loved this dragon. Dragons are my favorite fantasy creatures. Your dragon is very unique; especially with the antenna thing above its head. It's got the same thing at the ...

Hello! Okay, first of all, the hands are long but that's not a mistake. It can be called 'part of your imagination' because that's where all the ideas come from. ...

It makes me think of the old times when all photos were taken in black and white. Washington looks beautiful and flawless. The mountains at the back give the whole ...

Nicely said. At first the title of the poem had made me think it would be about a city or a country. But now that I've read the whole thing, ...

The title definitely suits the poem. There is a lot of emotion. The description is crystal clear about the person's feelings. Hatred is being reflected through the whole poem and ...

I really liked that short story of yours. It made my heart ache by just reading about all the pain and sadness the character is experiencing but that's just the ...