Twinkle4ever

Hi again, One thing is that it was so heart-aching. It filled my eyes with tears again. These stories you write are always filled with such strong emotions that people ...

“At least Vanessa isn’t here. If he saw her, he’d know everything.” And just when Shang said that, someone appeared out of cold flames from behind him and fell on ...

Oh my god. You scared ME to death. The line, I reach peace when my heart explodes in my chest. It's scary to think about death but you really had ...

I really liked the theme of the poem. It's quite entertaining, 'Don't butter my toast'. Neatly done like a professional poet. It’s that slap you on the face, knock it ...

I like the way you've put emphasis on the butterfly's beauty. They really are unique creatures. It seems like you're talking to the butterfly which is what I liked most ...

Thanks for the reviews everybody. I really appreciate it! :) :)

Hello again! You were right about the second chapter. It definitely is more interesting and full of adventure, suspense, fantasy. I liked it.... no wait, I loved it. The whole ...

The lyrics are good, however, I did feel a like it was a little empty. You can try adding a few new lines to it. Anyway, I like it that ...

The first picture is good although I would recommend that you take the picture of the whole puppy. Aww it's so cute! :) The little girl in the third picture ...

Chapter 3: A Secret Disclosed “What on Earth are you doing crouching like that in front of the window?” Amy questioned her strictly as though she were on patrol for ...

You've used excellent vocabulary. I like the way you've used so many rhyming words. It's fascinating indeed. Learn to love purpose, my love for purpose reflects in the depths of ...

Hey, I like them all. They look so clear and beautiful. All have different colors and they're eye-catching. The very last one is very interesting. The symbol of deadly hollows. ...

Hey, I read your story. It was good except for a few gramatical mistakes. You need to put commas at some places while at others there need to be full ...

Well, the funny thing here is that the girl in the third drawing is supposed to be wearing a wig. I just like to jumble up things. Her real hair ...

Hi! I like the idea of the bowl of rice with its cute eyes and mouth. The cutest thing about it is the tiny heart above the bowl. It's just ...