Twinkle4ever

Hey, I read your poem. I've got to say you've done a pretty good job. The title is very eye-catching. The poem made me think of vampires since they're immortal ...

Hi. First of all, I've got to say, the title is quite eye-catching. Second, while I was reading your poem, I had goose bumps. It was filled with something so ...

Hello! I like the way you write. You can definitely go further into poetry. Not once were you drifted away from the title. You stuck with it. You have a ...

Hi! First of all, I loved the dramatic mood you've created in this poem. You've certainly put in a lot of emotion. There's something about it which attracted me and ...

I really liked this one. It's quite entertaining. Its sweet and short. I don't think there's anything wrong with what you've written. I like the line, Run, 'Lissa, Run! I ...

Hey. I really like the flow of the poem. Not one place did I feel that there was something off. You stayed with the rhythm. That's good. You wrote professionally. ...

Hey writingangel124xx, I loved this chapter. I didn't get bored while reading; not one bit! It's amazing how you describe each place. I loved the city of Magic and I ...

Hello! Although I haven't read many poems, I've still never come across something so beautiful. It was really awe-inspiring. I liked the repetition of 'Be still, my soul' and the ...

Oh god, what you wrote scared the life out of me. I still liked it a lot. Your poetry attracted my attention and once I started reading, I couldn't stop ...

This poem is related to reality; things that happen all around us. I like your way of writing. The things you've pointed out in your poem are true. That's what ...

Hey, I like your poem, Mystery Man. It's short but you've clearly conveyed your message here. It's sad that you're not allowed to love this guy. Anyway, love conquers all! ...

This is my very first poem so I'm not sure if it's any good. It's about one of the nightmares I used to have a year ago. They used to ...

Hi. First of all, I love the title, it's catchy. Second, the I loved the whole poem. Especially the repetition of, Pessimists, you belong in a zoo. Other than that, ...

Hello. I read the beginning and I couldn't find any faults in it. You've done an outstanding job. There's definitely mystery here and It's really breathtaking! :D I liked the ...

Hey! Nice work with the camera. I can see the stick you've placed inside the dirt. Everything else is a bit blurry but I like that about the picture. I ...