Twinkle4ever

Hey, I really liked this poem. What threw me off a little was the title. I don't see anything that connects it with the poem. Or that's probably me. It ...

It was a good poem. Emotions were reflecting with each line. I like the title you've chosen for your poem. It was very well thought and eye-catching. It suits it. ...

It was a good poem. Emotions were reflecting with each line. I like the title you've chosen for your poem. It was very well thought and eye-catching. It suits it. ...

A very emotional poem reflecting the pain and hurt the person is feeling. I would suggest the use of capital letters when starting a new line otherwise it just throws ...

I like this story. Vivian is a daring girl, I see. She seems pretty unique to me already. I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters when ...

Oh, I see now. So that's what it really means. Well, thanks for that. It'll definitely help.

I've been feeling a little down lately. My teacher gave me a bad grade although it was just a small mistake in my maths test. I hadn't been feeling well ...

Everything looks so peaceful here. I love the caterpillar. It looks so fuzzy and cute. Just adorable. (Although I don't really like insects. This is the first time I've ever ...

Hi. I read your poem and it was awsome. I was completely mesmerized in it. The flow of the poem wasn't disturbed and you kept with the rhythm. The message ...

First of all, I love the title. It's eye-catching. Second, ofcourse, your poem is quite good. The flow is not disturbed once and the message was easily conveyed to me. ...

I was strolling outside under the beautiful night sky. The stars looked like tiny droplets of light hanging above the clouds. I really felt like flying in the sky and ...

It was short and sweet. What you wrote about love is true. No faults in that. Your poem had the rhythm. It was good. You chose the one word eye-catching ...

I really loved the cover! It's really beautiful and eye catching. Especially the way Allegiance is written. The L faded from the top and dark at the bottom. Truly a ...

Hi. That was an awsome story! It was very sweet and romantic. I'm simply amazed that you actually wrote something like that in your science class. That was a little ...

Hello. You've chosen the perfect title for it. 'She Bears a Traitor's Sword' I like it. It immediately caught my attention. I like your presentation. You've displayed a very neat ...