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Twinkle4ever

  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The night I died (the longer version)

    Thanks for all your comments!! :) :)

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Goodbye

    Wow. I'm glad it came to a good end. It's amazing how your writing is able to catch my attention everytime. I loved the descriptions in it and each and ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Dr. Gamble

    Woah! Your work reflects strong emotions. I like the part where you describe about the lies the girl tells herself just to make her feel better. You've described all the ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Window

    Okay, so I read your poem. I can say that it's very dramatic (Compliment). I couldn't find any faults except, 'Your with me' should be 'You're with me' 'Your behind ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The night I died (did I really die?)

    You can read 'the night I died(the longer version) to get the idea about what happened to scarlet. Enjoy :) The night I died… did I really die? I could ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: A little favor

    Hi. I can finally see your drawings. You asked about the clothes. For the girl: You can add beads on one lock of hair. (Probably on the right side) You ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Wings

    Okay... I think I'm reviewing backwards here. Oh well, here's what I think of these 'ANIME doodles'. You're emphasizing on wings so they're supposed to be more detailed. You can ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Bad Angel

    See? It's true! When you're angry, you draw better. It looks like a cool dude enjoying the weather while smoking. Then again, the way you've drawn his eyebrows, it's like ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hair Therapy 3

    Awww!! :D I love it! I wanted to like it thrice! :) The first drawing... I like the eyes the most. They're so attractive. I can even detect that tiny ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Chubby anime girl

    Okay... I think I shouldn't use paint next time. The eyes look vicious! I've used color pencils in her face and neck. The rest is done by paint. The out ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Fun snapping

    Okay! The first picture... It looks amazing. The rainbow colors on the leaves make them look almost magical. And I like the sunlight shimmering through the trees from above. It's ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: It's Missing You

    Hello! You wrote so well it made me want to read again! It was full of rhythm and emotion. Almost made me want to sing it out loud. Of course, ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Midnight Sun: Part II

    Hi. I loved this poem. It's filled with too many deep emotions. The picture gives me goose bumps. :) Anyway, you've written quite well. The flow is not disturbed once ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: A little favor

    I don't see it... All I see is a tiny box with ' X image ' written on it.

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The night I died (the longer version)

    The Night I Died I was strolling outside under the beautiful night sky. The stars looked like tiny droplets of light hanging above the clouds. I really felt like flying ...

    Aug 29, 2011


Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds.
— Albert Einstein