Twinkle4ever

Chapter 1: The night I died I was strolling outside under the beautiful night sky. The stars looked like tiny droplets of light hanging above the clouds. Everything was so ...

Hi! I'm amazed you call this worst of all your poems. It's definitely short but all in all it's sweet. Even when you think it's bad, there are still going ...

Oh my God! That poor girl. I feel sorry for her. Your writing had that effect on me. You seem to amaze me every time. Do carry on with this ...

Hey! I'm not confused here at all. I get the idea why you didn't describe the character. This piece you've written was full of deep emotions. I couldn't stop feeling ...

I like your thinking. You've chosen a good and suitable title for your poem. I have to agree with PurpleEurope. It is a bit long but not at all boring. ...

I know you must've posted this a long time ago but I just wanted to review one of your work. So here I am. I see you've done a pretty ...

Hey! You've started off your poem quite smoothly. A question is always a good way to start. At first I thought it would be all about the rain and its ...

Here are random anime drawings. I've used Faber-Castell colour pencils here. :) I think I should've drawn the rest of the head here... I need ideas for a good background ...

Hi! I read your story and I don't think it was boring at all. It reflects true friendship :). That's what I love most about it. Whatever you wrote, almost ...

I kind of like the title. 'Death' it's eye-catching but you could add another word or maybe an adjective to it. I think the poem is a translation of the ...

Hi again. Wow! You really have a poet in you. The poem is amazing! There is a fair amount of description and it's definitely different from the one's I've read. ...

It was a very sweet poem. 'Baby steps' makes me think of my little sister. Anyway, the emotions you've described in this poem are very clear. They can be interpretted ...

Okay. First of all, welcome to YWS. Second, I like the theme of this poem. The first paragraph caught my attention. Test tubes clattering, clashing Tumbling, spitting, spurting You've described ...

Okay. This drawing hasn't been edited and I've used color pencils here (only). So here the boy is heart-broken and wants to hurt himself with the knife but the little ...

Hey Starlight9! I finally found it. Your drawing shows that you've put a lot of effort into this. I really admire your ability to sketck a photo in black and ...