Twinkle4ever

I know it's short and that it might lack description but I did my best here. It was a class test and we were supposed to write a story between ...

Girl you're awesome! :D Each line was so short but the words were so strong! The rhyming and the flow, you stuck to it. The first paragraph just caught my ...

Hi! First of all, I would like to say that I felt sorry for the couple. You left that effect on me (Good! :)). Second, because the idea just popped ...

I've been writing this secret novel and these are the first few paragraphs (more like a few lines) of its third book. 'Virus irruption' is the subtitle of the book. ...

Hi! I didn't want to miss this one so here I am to review your work. :) The very first thing that caught my eye was the background you've given ...

Here's my review. I would say that the first two paragraphs do reflect the feeling of confusion. But when you say killing the dream of confidence. It seems to reflect ...

The first one's the cutest. You've done a pretty good job in the shading; especially in the hair. I like the beach outfits and the bandages look cool on the ...

It looks so adorable sleeping like that. There's only one problem here. The kitten's fur can't really be distinguished from the top. I'd suggest taking a side pose with a ...

First of all, 'I fought for you', very touching words. Second, you've written quite well. You gave the introduction about past, present and future. You explained your thoughts and opinions ...

First of all, 'I fought for you', very touching words. Second, you've written quite well. You gave the introduction about past, present and future. You explained your thoughts and opinions ...

First of all I would like to say that your poem was short, sweet, and enjoyable. I would suggest that you try using stronger words to grasp the readers attention. ...

Oooh! These are really good! The first picture: I like the red eyes. It's the most vicious thing about it. :) It looks more like a dangerous porcupine. Your immagination ...

Hey! You're a born artist. This cover looks quite unique. I would totally read a novel with a cover page as eye-catching as this one. :)

Hi! I've seen your anime drawing as well. I feel that you can improve if you do things seperately. If you're planning on doing more of anime drawings, then I'd ...

I really like this. You've done a pretty good job in mixing the colors. It looks very magical and also like a dream, of course. :). I would definitely want ...